Yeah, so I was looking at my old poster for Star Fox: Regime, and I thought "Wouldn't this be great if it were digital and cell-shaded?" So... I did. I was glad with how it turned out. I also re-worked the title a bit (the old one was nice, but it lacked panache).
Looks very awesome! Excellent composition and design elements here. Very snazzy title, and I like the translucent characters in the background. Really my only complaint lie in the way you drew Krystal. Your new look for her fits just fine, but either sh'es really short or Fox is really tall, as I remember them being about the same height in the games. That, and her face looks... odd? Something about the angle or the scale of the left side of it looks awkward to me. I wish I could be more specific, but I myself am no good at drawing canines yet.
I notice this poster has a lack of Arwings and Barrel rolls, but that can slide because your composition is so good
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Thanks - to answer your comments The entire poster goes along with a fanfiction ([link]) which I am working on writing - that is why it has that particular title. It's an alternate sequel to Assault (because IMHO Command sucked). As for Krystal being shorter - the way I drew her was not so much to emphasize her height (which would be about the same as Fox's) as it was to portray that she was sort of leaning against him - and in all humility, there is certainly room for improvement on my part, both there and in her face. I freehanded this, so it could have been better, admittedly. As for the lack of Arwings, etc, I simply didn't have room. I tried putting an Arwing in the poster, and it made it look too busy. I wanted this one to have a more epic feel, which made it necessary for me to lay out the composition very carefully - which unfortunately did not leave me enough room for an Arwing. But thank you - you've given me something to think about. Maybe I'll do another alternate poster. I appreciate your critique - thanks for the helpful pointers
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The gazelle wakes up knowing it must outrun the lion or be killed. The lion wakes up knowing it must outrun the slowest gazelle or starve to death. Whether you are the lion or the gazelle, you'd better be running.
no problem! Glad I could be of some help to you. And I think you certainly nailed that "epic" vibe you were going for dead on. And I've been looking for a good Starfox fic; I think i'll give yours a shot now
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The gazelle wakes up knowing it must outrun the lion or be killed. The lion wakes up knowing it must outrun the slowest gazelle or starve to death. Whether you are the lion or the gazelle, you'd better be running.
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The gazelle wakes up knowing it must outrun the lion or be killed. The lion wakes up knowing it must outrun the slowest gazelle or starve to death. Whether you are the lion or the gazelle, you'd better be running.
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